Editing checklist before and after Ontario Science Centre

1. Write your trip report for last week’s visit to Ontario Science Center. Check with two partners before publishing.

              I went to Ontario Science Center last Friday with my classmates. I started at 10.45 am from home. I arrived subway at 11 am. I was waiting for TTC bus 10 min, later I got bus. I reached by there at 11.30 am. At first, I met Tuyu, later I met everybody. After few discussions Joseph collected money for tickets. At first we took group photos at outside. We got tickets and get in inside. At first, we went planet level it was very nice experience to learn many things there. Later we went around Ontario Science Center. I saw beautiful gardening there and took pictures also. I saw different levels there like planetarium, kids play zone, space, small small aquariums, and beautiful gardening. Later I had lunch at cafeteria. I arrived home with kewen help he took us by car. Thank you so much kewen. Thank you so much to everybody.           



  Title: Trip report of visit to Ontario Science Centre.

          I went to Ontario Science Centre with my classmates last Friday. I left my home at 10.45 am. I arrived in subway at 11 am. I waited for TTC bus 10 mins and then got on a bus. I reached there at 11.30 am. First, I met Tuyu then I met everybody. After a short briefing Joseph collected money for tickets. We took a group photo outside then we got tickets and entered the building. We first went to the planet level. It was a very nice experience to learn many things there. We went around Ontario Science Centre. I saw beautiful gardens and took a lot of pictures also. There were different levels like Planetarium, Kids play zone, Space, Very small aquariums, and a beautiful garden, I had lunch at the cafeteria. I arrived home with Keven hekp he took us by car. Thanks Keven. Thanks everybody.