Friday, 15 May 2015

A Difficult experience in my childhood before and after editing

 Before 
     
                We are three sisters. I am the middle of them. My elder sister got married and younger sister pursued M.Pharm. When I was 8 years old they were very talented. They were better than me.Now they are jealous of me because I settled very well comparing to them. In my life, I had small difficult experience with my elder sister that was my elder sister have gold, clothes, bentex, and etc. So, always she is doing wrong that is my father has given money for buying clothes to my elder sister because me and my younger sister don't know which one is good/bad. My elder sister buy the good one for her (like quality, high price, good design) bad one for us. Still she don't change for her self. This is difficult experience in my life.


After

         We are three sisters. I am the middle one. My elder sister got married and younger sister pursued M.Pharmacy. When I was 8 years old, they were very talented. They were better than me. Now they are jealous of me because I settle very well compared to them. In my life, I had a difficult experience with my elder sister because she got all the gold, clothes, and bentex. So, she always mistreated us because my father would give her money to buy clothes for us all. Because my younger sister and I didn't know good and bad, my elder sister buy the good ones for herself better quality, high price, better design and inferior ones for us. This was a difficult experience in my life.

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